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PostSubject: Structure!!   Sat May 31, 2008 10:07 am

Eragon as a book was very good but i think there was too much travel involved in it. what do you think?
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PostSubject: I disagree   Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:24 am

I don't really think so. Most of the time that they were traveling there was stuff going on, such as Brom tutoring (*cough*his son*cough*) Eragon, which is interesting. I never got bored during the book.
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PostSubject: lol   Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:31 am

Hehe you wont give up till its proven will you Smile

I really hope Brom isnt Eragons father and hope he is to be honest.
Dont - because he is dead and that will drive Eragon mad and start to question Broms motives for not telling Eragon.
Do - because it would be sooooo cool if he was and it would be better than Morzan being Eragons father.
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PostSubject: Re: Structure!!   Mon Jun 09, 2008 3:57 am

Nelly wrote:
Hehe you wont give up till its proven will you Smile

I really hope Brom isnt Eragons father and hope he is to be honest.
Dont - because he is dead and that will drive Eragon mad and start to question Broms motives for not telling Eragon.
Do - because it would be sooooo cool if he was and it would be better than Morzan being Eragons father.

I wont give up enen if it is proven otherwise! IT'S TRUE!!!!! Um... well we should probobly stay on topic.
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PostSubject: hehe   Mon Jun 09, 2008 11:50 pm

Yea we probaly should.
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PostSubject: Yes   Thu Jun 12, 2008 11:06 pm

Well, I'm perfectly happy with the structure! Does anyone besides me and Nelly have an oppinion on this?
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PostSubject: Re: Structure!!   Fri Jun 13, 2008 1:51 am

I think the structure was a very good way to introduce characters, background, and many elements of the world of Alegasia which made it a very more "real" (couldn't think of a better word) world.
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PostSubject: Yes   Fri Jun 13, 2008 9:33 am

Yes, I think that everything was great, and he dropped several subtle hints on several things in the future (*cough*suchasBromisEragon'sfather*cough*).
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PostSubject: Hey   Sat Jun 14, 2008 4:11 am

Chris P also adds hints to the whole Eragon Arya relationship but hmmm you dont accept that eh! Very Happy
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PostSubject: *sigh*   Sat Jun 14, 2008 8:31 pm

No, he hints that Eragon has an unhealthy crush on a older woman who will never love him. Also, she is such a Mary Sue. Eragon, as the hero, couldn't end up with a Marry Sue. I mean she's just so discustingly PERFECT. She's very powerfull with magic, she's great with a sword, and of course she is oh so beautiful. AND TO TOP IT OFF SHE'S A PRINCESS. This isn't happy fairy gumdrop land, son.
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PostSubject: Eragon   Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:05 am

I loved it! I thought it had a decent structure, though I wasn't a huge fan of the traveling. But I don't see any way CP could have chaged that! So I still love it, besides it's not like there wasn't like anything wasn't going on during the travel*coughFuturewife/longlostdadcough*
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PostSubject: Yeah, there is a little too much travel.   Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:41 am

Brom and Eragon go to this town, than that one, than two more than another... I get tired just thinking about it!
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PostSubject: Re: Structure!!   Tue Jun 17, 2008 10:51 pm

I loved the structure. In fact, I thought that that was one of the great things about the book that Eldest lacked. I found myself bored when there were long pauses in traveling in Eragon (not that bored of course, just as 'bored' as you can get with Inheritance!). The only time I'm not bored when there isn't traveling is when there is action, new character relationships moving forward, and training! I absolutely love training! Especially magic training...although some people don't like that (hard to believe). Oh, and it seems as if a lot of you are sick...the amount of coughing is incredible Wink ! Is something going around?
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PostSubject: Re: Structure!!   Tue Jun 17, 2008 11:50 pm

lol! tempest! Actually, I think there is. I have a sore throat, but I occasionally cough too. *cough*
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PostSubject: i lke the travel so you dont think it is a teeny place   Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:31 am

the travel was fine
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PostSubject: Re: Structure!!   Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:38 am

I don't understand why everyone hates the traveling! It's interesting...

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PostSubject: meh   Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:40 am

It is sorta but somtimes boring.
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PostSubject: Re: Structure!!   Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:43 am

I like it, because crazy stuff happens.

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PostSubject: meh   Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:47 am

Crazy stuff always happens!
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PostSubject: Re: Structure!!   Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:50 am

Ya, but extra crazy stuff happens!

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PostSubject: lol   Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:51 am

Where's Zeb gone!
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PostSubject: Re: Structure!!   Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:53 am

He went to the magical pixie land, where all bad boys go when they die!

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PostSubject: omg   Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:59 am

You crazy person!
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PostSubject: Re: Structure!!   Tue Jul 01, 2008 1:02 am

lol! Yesh I am!

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PostSubject: meh   Tue Jul 01, 2008 1:06 am

Indeed you are...
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