Eragon poetry

I dislike him at the moment.

And that's fine....gah, we need a new poster on this topic!!!

yes so boring...

sombody write something new.....please

'Twas his love that sealed my fate.
I would never have done that out of hate.
Left my life to let him live.
Now to him my heart I give.

Just a short poem I wrote off the top of my head. It is from Saphira's viewpoint about giving her life up so that Eragon could keep living. It doesn't, any means, express that I think Saphira will die. I really hope she doesn't.

Pretty...

Simply Aravelle wrote:

eragon, zeb is in the wrong here. You did post 'he', but Zeb changed it to she. Zeb, please be nice...

Hey by the way guys (just to clear the air) I did NOT do that.

Anyways, very nice poem EmilyN!!!

Riight...I'll be keeping my eye on you.

thanks Zeb!!

and Sam!!

Here's another one. This is supposed to be a poem written by Arya. A poem written about our dear Eragon.
Hope you like it.


Broken heart
once more
Forever lost
forever mourned.

My heart is shattered
completely destroyed.
I felt I was falling
into the void.

Until one day
this boy came along.
Healed my heart
and righted the wrong.

I tried not to show
how much I cared.
To show my feelings
I wouldn't dare.

For if I proved a distraction
I would possibly be his downfall.
He would not control his actions
and that could be the death of all.

So I keep my fellings secret
until the battle's done.
I will hide my heart
Until the war is won!

Wow, that one is even better, EmN!!! Now, if only you changed it to Nasuada's POV it would be PERFECT!

:-P Honest sam!

Good! But I agree with king zeb on Nasuada

boys, boys. do you honestly think i'll change it?

anyway, where did "King Zeb" come from?

lol, no, just whistful thinking... oh well, it's still a great poem!!

Oh, and about "King Zeb"... Sam has always been considered the Queen of the forum (because she is amazing!), and so we decided to vote for King. Most people voted for me, so I'm King now. It's more of an inside joke than a real postition worth anything... but it's fun! btw Case is Prince. We don't have a Princess yet... And Elliot (Nelly is his username) is the Jester!!!! lol!

thanks Zeb. you seem to think very highly of Sam. so, when are y'all going to vote for a princess?

Well, we could do it whenever but if everyone puts what emily put behinde it would be her. And besides you have to have been on here for a long time.

oh, ok.

So, i guess Em gets it by default.

k. anyways. i'm working on another eragon poem and i'll post it soon.

COOL!

[quote="Zeb"]lol, no, just whistful thinking... oh well, it's still a great poem!!

Oh, and about "King Zeb"... Sam has always been considered the Queen of the forum (because she is amazing!), and so we decided to vote for King. Most people voted for me, so I'm King now. It's more of an inside joke than a real postition worth anything... but it's fun! btw Case is Prince. We don't have a Princess yet... And Elliot (Nelly is his username) is the Jester!!!! lol![/quote]

Thank you

You are king?? I was not aware of this o.O Well, maybe I didn't remember...
Yes, you remembered his position xD

i am the pretty princess hehe beautifulness

EternalDreamer wrote:

Zeb wrote:

lol, no, just whistful thinking... oh well, it's still a great poem!!

Oh, and about "King Zeb"... Sam has always been considered the Queen of the forum (because she is amazing!), and so we decided to vote for King. Most people voted for me, so I'm King now. It's more of an inside joke than a real postition worth anything... but it's fun! btw Case is Prince. We don't have a Princess yet... And Elliot (Nelly is his username) is the Jester!!!! lol!

Thank you

You are king?? I was not aware of this o.O Well, maybe I didn't remember...
Yes, you remembered his position xD

psh, yes you voted for me, 'member? you can still go back and check the King thread in the Anything and Everything Else section!

Sorry, I forgot...