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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Tue Jan 13, 2009 3:05 am

yeah im sure you do
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Wed Jan 14, 2009 3:48 am

Em, do you have any more poetry?
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Fri Jan 16, 2009 6:45 am

hmmm thinking
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Fri Jan 16, 2009 6:51 am

Okay, cool.
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Sat Jan 17, 2009 1:25 am

Shes not a big poetry writer.

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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Sat Jan 17, 2009 4:34 am

Okay. I'm kinda into poetry. A couple of months ago when I was doing poetry in school, I hated it with a passion. Now I like it. I just don't like writing about stuff I'm not interested in.
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Sat Jan 17, 2009 9:23 pm

yep case knows me best i am def not a poetry writer or just any type of writer hehe i prove it because i failed my writing test in 7th grade oopsie
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Thu Feb 05, 2009 5:19 am

Here is the rest of the Poem that i started before.

Evil Awakes


Shadow, Fear, Wind, and Poison,
All the elements of evil.
Rain down on this tiny world,
And envelope its people.
Shadow, Fear, Wind, and Poison
All the elements of evil.

Shadow the dark the deep,
Cast a black, deep, past.
So strong this deep ebony he11,
Its can bind the soul.
Shadow, Fear, Wind, and Poison,
All the elements of evil.

Fear the shiver down our spine,
The terror that seals the soul.
So fearful this terrible fear,
It shows in the whites of eyes.
Shadow, Fear, Wind, and Poison,
All the elements of evil.

Wind oh the trickster,
That soothes the soul.
So powerful it can rip the earth apart,
Yet so soft it can brush thy lips.
Shadow, Fear, Wind, and Poison,
All the elements of evil.

Poison the sickening crutch,
That can kill.
So small,
Yet still harmful.
Shadow, Fear, Wind, and Poison,
All the elements of evil.
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Thu Feb 05, 2009 7:11 am

'tis like your siggy. not bad, though i don't really get it.

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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Thu Feb 05, 2009 10:43 am

It's not bad, but it doesn't sound.... honest, if you know what I mean. One important thing about poetry is that it sounds true, honest, inspired. Your poem, Em, is not bad, but it sounds like you were trying to immatate a deep poem that you don't fully understand. It's a good start though.

This isn't quite exactly completly really actually Eragon-related, but I just scraped together this poem together in school a few days ago. Just thought I'd get yall's thoughts about it.

Why did it leave withought me
Again?
I see the yellow and red of the back of the bus
Sink over the horizon like a sunset
Again.
Would anyone in it
Notice I wasn't on it?
Most likely they didn't, or wouldn't, or couldn't,
Because if they did, or they, would, or they could,
I wouldn't be sitting here like an idiot
On this uncomfortable curb
Again.


Like I said, I haven't gone back and edited it yet...
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Thu Feb 05, 2009 10:52 am

Go on SFF and look up Aravelle Penwyche, I have tons of poems up there and plan on putting more!
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Thu Feb 05, 2009 7:59 pm


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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:51 am

Zeb wrote:
It's not bad, but it doesn't sound.... honest, if you know what I mean. One important thing about poetry is that it sounds true, honest, inspired. Your poem, Em, is not bad, but it sounds like you were trying to immatate a deep poem that you don't fully understand. It's a good start though.

My teachers thought it was excellent and so did my mom and my mom is also a teacher
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:14 am

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It's not bad, but it doesn't sound.... honest, if you know what I mean. One important thing about poetry is that it sounds true, honest, inspired. Your poem, Em, is not bad, but it sounds like you were trying to immatate a deep poem that you don't fully understand. It's a good start though.

My teachers thought it was excellent and so did my mom and my mom is also a teacher
sure, but that doesn't answer what zeb said.

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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:27 am

and it was not copied and i did not try to immitate a different poem and i got my insirations from we have been reading some really dark poems like evil and so thats where i got my inspirations from
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:36 am

I'm not saying it's bad, it just sounds sorta poser-ish.
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:16 am

Are you trying to get into an argument? Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:52 am

no, I think it's being taken that way though.

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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Sun Feb 08, 2009 3:43 am

EmilyNowell wrote:
Are you trying to get into an argument? Razz

Rolling Eyes Oh yes of course, I just LOVE arguing with people. Especially Em! Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:01 am

We already know you like arguing and debating, so who knows. We should just start calling you Contenditore.
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Sun Feb 08, 2009 6:25 am

I was just trying to give some constructive critisism...
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Tue Feb 10, 2009 4:38 am

well dont critize i hate it its my first time just chill
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:29 am

Em <3's Case!! wrote:
well dont critize i hate it its my first time just chill
it's fine. but you sure are taking it the wrong way, that's why you hate my advise for rc.

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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Tue Feb 10, 2009 9:21 am

Em <3's Case!! wrote:
well dont critize i hate it its my first time just chill

Oh, so you're posting something online, yet you don't want anyone's oppinion on it? I'm just trying to help, what's wrong with that?
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PostSubject: Re: Eragon poetry   Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:26 pm

I don't know. Em, why post if no one likes it? you know you're going to mkae poeple hate it. what is the point? Only post if you know it's good, then no one will try to help you with your posts and such.

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