Have you written any?

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Tue Nov 18, 2008 9:10 am

im more likely to kill people (i.e. CP and all of the editors and whoever published the book)

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Tue Nov 18, 2008 10:58 am

You wouldn't kill CP, You would be banned from the forum I'm sure!!!!!!!

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Tue Nov 18, 2008 1:48 pm

What poem did you look at, Zeb? The newest one was 'A Waiting Bride'. Did you look at one, some, or all of them?

Here is a new one, I wrote last night:

The Heart's Lust

Your eyes are like a storming sea,
How I'd wish they'd gaze upon me

Your lips are like rose petals
Lovely and pink
But forever in bloom

Your hair is like white gold
Melted down and strewn into wires
By the great Hephaestus himself

Your skin is like a cluster of clouds
Soft and white
How I long to touch it

Your mind is so bountiful
Like the autumn harvest
Filled with all varieties
Of the fruits of knowledge

Your heart is like a glass ornament
Beautiful and delicate;
I would cherish it forever

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Tue Nov 18, 2008 2:06 pm

The pome above is now on SFF, but I have another on coming up too, called 'The Monster'. It is a companion to Dagger in my Heart, so keep your eyes out for it!!

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Tue Nov 18, 2008 10:29 pm

Arabella wrote:: Um what do you need my help with, Case?

Oh PEOPLE!!! I have written a new poem, but here is a link to all of my works:

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http://fanfiction.shurtugal.com/viewuser.php?uid=5139[/quote[/url]] I can't figure out how to get my fanfic on shurtugal. How do i do it?

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Thu Nov 20, 2008 8:18 am

Um hold on, I'll message you.
Here are 2 new poems, one is nameless and the other is called The Cross. I wrote both of them today, and inspired by the same person.

The Cross
Why must I be the sacrifice
When it will never appease you…

Why must my heart die in vain
When forever I will suffer
From this endless pain?

How can he be so blind
Sitting next to me
Doesn’t see the wall of haze
Clouding my eyes

How can he not see
My blood being spilled
All across my body?
He was the killer
He punctured the vein
His lips lies
Of his ignorance he feigns

I am the sufferer
I hold what others cannot
Hold for themselves
I have taken the cross for them
But the biggest burden of all
Was of love’s loss

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Why must it pain me
To see your face everyday?
Why must I hold back
My tears and turn away?
I never knew an angel could make life heck...

Why is nothing I do
Ever good enough for you?

I would climb the mountains
Swim the sea
I will count the stars
If it means you'll love me.

Freeze me upon the mountaintops
Drown me in the sea
Strike me with lightning;
Put me out of my misery

My heart is a vase in a store
You broke it, and it's not mine anymore
It was bought with my pain
It was bought with my blood
But all I ever really wanted was your love

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those are good.

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Thu Nov 27, 2008 11:15 pm

YEAH!

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Sat Nov 29, 2008 2:14 am

Thanks. You'd be amazed the kind of poems heartbreak can inspire...
And guys!! Heck?! It's heck, not used in a swear way. I was refering to the place, don't change that...

YOU GUYS DID IT AGAIN!!! Evil or Very Mad

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Sat Nov 29, 2008 2:32 am

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Sat Nov 29, 2008 10:08 pm

huh? what are you saying kk to zash?

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Just random posting, I guess. Maybe he's just trying to get on the top 10 list.

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:43 pm

WHats going on back on topic.

Posts : 274 Join date : 2008-10-06 Location : Oklahoma!

Alrighty then.

I've written a bit, but nothing worth reading...

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:46 pm

I'm working on mine. once i get it all done i'll submit it to shurtgal.

Posts : 274 Join date : 2008-10-06 Location : Oklahoma!

What is it about?

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:49 pm

Its the final battle between galby and eragon.

Posts : 274 Join date : 2008-10-06 Location : Oklahoma!

Hm, okay. Is is just a fight or is there some big unexpected twist?

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:53 pm

There are a FEW unexpected twists.

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like?

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:34 am

we dont want him to spoil it, we will know when he is done,

i write stuff but whenever i do i spend all my time making it better and give up after working for hours on half a page

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Mon Dec 01, 2008 2:13 am

i havent written any in a while but now that im back on here i might be able to write more also

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Fri Dec 19, 2008 9:28 am

Here's some new material, soon to be posted on SFF. I have some new stuff on there, by the way.

Stained Scarlet

It happened again.
I wake up to
A pillow wet
Stained scarlet
And tasting of saltwater

Why must I go through this
Every night?
Why must I say goodbye
To my dreams?

Even they are not so sweet
The fearful phantasms
Nocturnally infesting
Are so much kinder
Than the bitter iron
That frames me

Every night I am
Stained scarlet there
But the moment I wake up
Those wounds heal

I just want to hide
Close my eyes
Dive into the lithium

I have no need to breathe
My heart was lost long ago
My senses numb

How could I pay attention
To the air
When all I see
Is this gaping hole in my chest?

Scars surrounding
My chest stained scarlet
The one stain no one can cleanse

Let me give into
Eternal peace stained scarlet.
Is that too hard for you?

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Fri Dec 26, 2008 2:49 am

cool even though i did not read it but anyway i suck at writing stories oh im so tried my littles cuzes wont leave me alone ahhh

Subject: Re: Have you written any? Fri Dec 26, 2008 4:42 pm

You didn't even read it? I pour my heart and soul into my poetry and you can't even take a minute of your time to read it? You just pointlessly post, telling the world how sucky your writing is...