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+15Rahl Fish Head Living A Love Song EmilyNowell kaibo Matt S. eragon5217 DeltaFlip Domia abr Wyrda Spikethechao(a.k.a. Alex) Elliot TempestWings TheShadow Simply Aravelle Zeb 19 posters |
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Fish Head
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 |  Subject: Re: Eragon poetry  Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:25 am | |
| nah, I thought it was more CHESSY
(i'm atec123 on there) | |
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EmilyNowell
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:28 am | |
| Sorry. I'm going to go edit that. I wasn't paying attention. I really do know how to spell, I've just been up until at least 11 and visiting people for the last week and a half. | |
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Fish Head
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:29 am | |
| its spelled right, click on chessy, just shows how bad speller I am. | |
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Emster
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:31 am | |
| not as bad as Case he cant even spell pen correctly LOL | |
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ElvishPrincess
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:34 am | |
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Emster
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:36 am | |
| wait hmm what do you mean | |
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ElvishPrincess
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:37 am | |
| meaning its not bad its ok | |
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Emster
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:39 am | |
| oh well i thinks its hilarious | |
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ElvishPrincess
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:40 am | |
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Emster
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:45 am | |
| this is how case spelled pen PIN when he was meaning a pen-pal which is spelled PEN not PIN | |
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Zeb
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:46 am | |
| Whatever. Get back on topic. | |
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ElvishPrincess
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:53 am | |
| here's mine. it's really bad::
Alone, Powerless
Tired and chained,
Sapphira stands
ready to fight to
the death to win,
to kill the false king,
whether it claims her life,
she does not care,
as long as he dies,
she does not care | |
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Emster
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 05, 2009 5:45 am | |
| shadow, fear, wind, and poison all the elements of evil rain down on this tiny world then envelope it and curse its people shadow, fear, wind, and poison all the elements of evil the best i can do  | |
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EmilyNowell
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:57 am | |
| Bella and Em. I thought both of ya'll's poems were good. I'd love to see both of you post more. | |
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Zeb
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Wed Jan 07, 2009 11:01 am | |
| Agreed! They're both really good! | |
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Emster
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Thu Jan 08, 2009 4:35 am | |
| okay well heres another
Sky and Sea,
Keep harm from me.
Earth and Fire,
Bring me my desire.
and another
Strength of Stone
Be in my Bone
Power of Light
Sustain my fight
and another
Bud and Blossom, Leaf and Tree
Find Him Bind him, now to me
Shoot and seedling, root and bough
Threads of love entwine us now | |
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EmilyNowell
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Thu Jan 08, 2009 9:37 am | |
| Oooo! I really like the last one. The words flow together perfectly and it sounds great. | |
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Emster
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Thu Jan 08, 2009 11:18 pm | |
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EmilyNowell
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Thu Jan 08, 2009 11:50 pm | |
| You're welcome.  It's no problem. I enjoy reading and reviewing people's work and letting them know what I think. | |
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Fish Head
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Fri Jan 09, 2009 12:48 am | |
| same here,but im not that good at it. | |
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Rahl
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Fri Jan 09, 2009 1:00 am | |
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Emster
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Fri Jan 09, 2009 2:25 am | |
| really thanks it took me awhile to get the poems right | |
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Fish Head
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Emster
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:14 am | |
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Jumpmann
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| | Subject: Re: Eragon poetry Mon Jan 12, 2009 8:25 am | |
| hmm. It's okay. I mean, I don't think it's bad. | |
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